Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise for the noise
• describe what action you will take.
Dear John and Sara,
I am writing in response to your complain letter about the noise from my flat.
Unfortunately, during the last few days we have been busy with constructing the kitchen. After the last week’s heavy rain the ceiling was leaked and it destroyed some parts of the kitchen such as shelves, oven and the floor. Consequently, we took actions in order to fix the problem.
I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience I may have caused. I managed to make the constructions during the day to avoid any sound and noise after 6 pm that the neighbors return back home and I did not know that you were at home all day long.
Since the noise was a nuisance for you and your family, I would be grateful if you accept my invitation for dinner on Saturday, 21st of November. This way my wife and I can apologize in person and we would get familiar with each other as well.
Once again I apologize for the noise that I have made.
Yours faithfully,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...and noise after 6 pm that the neighbors return back home and I did not know that you were a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56741573034 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59110600409 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9222661939 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308967683748 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113236047354 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110375399709 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176522127892 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119747517991 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.