Nowadays young people are spending most of their leisure time using smartphone and tablets for amusement. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion.
Human lifestyle is pampered in the lap of technology. Presently, most of youngsters have tendency to spend long time on electronic gadgets such as smart phones and tablets for amusement. As a result, they are encountering various social and health concerns. Here, i would like to assert that this trend is turning to be a negative outcome.
Numerous demerits of this trend can be mentioned in detail. To commence with, health concerns are on the rise among youngsters who use such devices for a long time. To demonstrate, young generation is encountering various health problems such as weak ...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
1. duplicated/similar transition words, like:
To demonstrate, young generation is encountering various health problems such as weak optics, back pain,
To demonstrate, youngsters, nowadays, keep using their phones or tabs whenever they are free and they are not willing
can find more.
2. transition words are relatively over used. Don't need one transition word for one sentence always.
3. sentence lengths are relative short. may need some compound or complex sentences.
4. sentence structures are not in varieties.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 351 350
No. of Characters: 1801 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.328 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.131 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.817 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.55 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.581 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.261 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.496 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.021 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Hello sir, i want to know one
Hello sir, i want to know one thing is the crietiera of marking has been hard on testbig ????
I mean normally i used to get 7.5 or 8.0 bands for such kind of written essay but i am not satisfied with score
I guess marking is over strict. Is it ?
Yes, we got feedback from our
Yes, we got feedback from our test takers and the marking is getting more strict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the youngsters') or simply say ''most youngsters''.
Suggestion: most of the youngsters; most youngsters
...ed in the lap of technology. Presently, most of youngsters have tendency to spend long time on ele...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rious social and health concerns. Here, i would like to assert that this trend is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32193732194 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94072854096 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0142680059 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182912596604 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473509099401 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571745676595 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973916814777 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381985303131 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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