Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that is runs, in order to save money.
write a letter to the local council.
-give details of how you and your friend or family use the centre
-explain why the sport and leisure centre is important for the local community
-describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closses
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention some issues about closing the sport and leisure center that is in my neighborhood.
I am a resident of Janet Street who has been living here since 6 years ago. All of my family members including my wife, my 2 children and I use this center in evenings every other day. I attend the gym while my children join the gymnastic and chess clubs and my wife use the swimming pool on the regular basis.
This center plays a central role in the community since there is not any other center in the environment. Most of the residents of this area attend the classes that are held in the center and it would be impossible for us to get to the other center since there is not any sport salon or gym in the vicinity.
Closing the center will have some detrimental effects on the health of the people since nowadays, the majority of people follow a sedentary lifestyle and lack some physical activities in their routines. This center gives the residents the chance to do some sport while they spend their time with family.
I hope you make considerate decision and looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the classes that are held in the center and it would be impossible for us to get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6308411215 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41246888354 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3283547369 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946863883492 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427909938234 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415133547057 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059969806638 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511810742384 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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