You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Maria,
How are you? Hope this will find you in good health. At first, I apologize for the delay to give a reply to your letter, as I was busy with shifting to my new home. I am just writing to let you know about my new place of living.
It is known to that I was not very happy about my old home. It was not only noisy but also insecure to reside. Since it was on the ground floor, there was much scope for the miscreants to do theft. Whenever I complained about these problems to the landlord, he did not pay any attention to my problems. At last, I decided to move from that place.
Now, my new home is very comfortable and secure. It is a typical residential place, so the people are very concerned about making any crowd. The building is under the surveillance of the security camera, which makes me feel more secure than before.
No more today. I think it will be great if you come here and see my new house by yourself.
Take care.
Your friend,
Toya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lf. Take care. Your friend, Toya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26737967914 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23177319098 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6409802817 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.2 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15146883007 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515380835402 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665651462203 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810077582304 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066308913061 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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