Tourism in the United Kingdom contributes billions of pounds sterling to the UK economy.The table below identiies the twelve most visited paid-admission attractions in the UK in 1999 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares about how many travellers visited the given twelve different attractions in the UK from 1999 to 2000.
Overall, it can be seen that while the number of visitors for 'Victoria and Albert Museum' and 'Flamingo Land Park and Zoo' surged, the remaining fascinations saw a gradual decline with the exception of Millennium Dome and British Airways London Eye.
In detail, in 2000, Millennium Dome and British Airways London Eye stood at 6,616,874E and 3,300,000E, making it the top most and second in the rank respectively. It is interesting to note that these two (Millennium Dome a...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 212 200
No. of Characters: 1038 1000
No. of Different Words: 129 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.816 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.896 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.837 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.407 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.713 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ning fascinations saw a gradual decline with the exception of Millennium Dome and British Airways Lon...
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Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of Chessington World of Adventure.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, second, so, while, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19711538462 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90721515596 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4236038924 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.125 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829433269975 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426297883564 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774725061417 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724076904656 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992514857719 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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