In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?
In the past, in Korea, we knew how many spoons and chopsticks people who lived in next door have. It means that my neighbours and my family were close as much as I said. However, at the present time, we often feel lonely and live much more isolated life. This essay will talk about why this situation happen and what should we do to improve the issue.
Although there are various factors not to make a friendly relationship between neighbours and me, there are, I think, two main reason to disrupt to get close among others. First of all, those who is living now are too busy regardless of age and occupations. They have to get up early in the morning and do overwork at the workplace then come back home late in the day. This repeated daily-routine causes to become hard friends with next-door person. To solve this problem, we should star form saying hello to residents when you see them. It looks like trivial thing, but it will be helpful to get close, In addition, people need to take a time for looking into their life to help themselves.
Secondly, there are too many competitions in our life. In my opinion, a social system are pushing us to win, especially in education. Comparing with the past, if one of my neighbours succeed in business or school, some who hared about that get green with envy for their success and then they backbite their neighbours by talking and guessing what those people achieved success did for that in bad way. Of course, not everybody do like that. However, because of excessive competition, a successful man look down next people and a failed man envy other's achievement. Furthermore, people find fault with others. Nowadays people are becoming self-centered, so some do well in a competition, others do not like that. Many should be not only generous in other's success or good events, but also congratulate other's one sincerely.
To sum up, we do not know well between our neighbours, even who lives nest door. It means that society is getting dreary. To prevent from changing that, we should try to be friendly to our neighbours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, i think, in addition, of course, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68219178082 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55847874204 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9672455073 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.380952381 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285194005601 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651309531775 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609090871212 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15356013854 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592141792815 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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