Fossil fule is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development ?
It is evident that fossil fuel plays a dorminant role in comparison with other sources of energy. However, some countries nowadays show preference to use alternative energy sources. In my opinion, it is a positive development.
In reference to individual, using alternative sources of energy is benificial in some ways. First, fossil fuels such as oil will not last forever. To cut down on fuel used, national authorities tend to raise tax or increase the price. This could result in heavier economic burden of each people. In condition, the use of fossil fuel brings large amount of carbon dioxide, which is so harmless to people's health. Therefore, the need of alternative energy sources should be marked as high on agenda.
To use alternative sources of energy is not only individual gain, but also community benefit. If people reduce the reliance on fossil fuel, global warming will be slowed down stemming from the decline of the quantities of greenhouse gases released into the atmosphere. This could bring about achievement of a sustainable development. In terms of the depletion of natural resources, world supplies of fossil fuel has dropped at alarming rate. Therefore, it is necessary to replaced them by other energy source.
In conclusion, fossil fuel remains the large source of world energy consumption. In terms of energy use, it is positive development that some countries attemp to reduce the dependence on this fuel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2017167382 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82974883951 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9707539737 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283348059799 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981420079488 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851158898127 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202712179487 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485993572213 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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