The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn,
and relearn” – Alvin Toffle. What do you understand from Alvin’s statement? Elaborate on your understanding and support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In the 21st century, they will not just be illiterates, those who can not read and write. This century, the meaning of literacy has changed and its level became higher than writing and reading. for the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of the science that a literate person should know about them.
To begin with, the literacy has become very different from past century because of new methods of living influenced by new technologies. the base of this technologies is the computer. By the computer replaced the traditional style of working with new methods. For example, the new method in the business is electronic commerce and this kind of business needs to computer systems. So, everyone should learn to work with the computer.
In addition, another one differences of literacy in this century is learning the new methods of communication. With the advent of the internet, old means of communication such as letter and fax have been abandoned. For instance, instead of fax and letter, people should learn how to send a text or a document by Email and learn to work with the social networks.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on illiteracy and literacy in the 21st century, my personal sentiment is that by learning the sciences of the computer and internet, everyone can have the minimum level of literacy that needs in this century.
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| 2018-12-03 | saritha vemula | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93965517241 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70717108206 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556034482759 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8609353021 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853435713552 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364289306633 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640584558062 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553920186337 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410685304765 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.