"Reform is seldom brought about by people who are concerned with their own reputation and social standing. Those who are really in earnest about reforming a government, an educational system, or any other institution must be willing to be viewed with disdain by the rest of the world."
The issue topic views that any reform should start from the self rather than seeking it from outside world. The people who try to change the world by reforming in government, educational or institutional process must be viewed by disdain because any change that is started from outside world is not sustainable, even not viable. I personally agree with the line of this issue topics in the sense that one should be the starter of any reform but that should be started from inner self rather than searching in the outside world.
It is the fundamental idea of sustainability that any reform or positive change should be started from an individual who seeks that change. The leader should be an exemplary one, only then the follower have chance to imitate from the leadership. If the top ranking individuals are corrupt, the follower learns the quality rather than virtue. In the developing world where there is widespread poverty and vulnerability, the leaders are corrupt and the law and order situation is weak. In contrast, in the developed nations, there are many things to learn from the leaders by the general people about moral standards, such nations have moved forward in the path of development. The people of the nation are honest, intelligent and diligent.
The next view point in support of above issue is that every individual should be able to act as a change agent so that the mass effect is positive. In the underdeveloped nations, the top ranking officials are corrupt but they try to impose other people the rule of law which ultimately turns to be futile. This is the main cause of low or no development in the third world nations. Consequently, there is widespread corruption, social organizations are weak and enforcement of the law and order situation is weak. In such nations, there is political instability due to lack of confidence upon each other. The people are suffering from rampant poverty; there are protests and demonstrations very frequently, so over all development scenario is bleak.
Without proper self righteousness, it is fruitless to initiate reform in the social organizations like in education, government bureaucracy and other social institutions like development projects, nongovernmental organizations and civil society. The situation gives a sense of envy and jealous among each other. There is lack of the trust with each other; all people are scenic and apprehensive to take right actions. Such a reform attempt is just ostentatious. It is unable to win favor of the general people, which ultimately leads to poor law and order situation in the long run.
Some may argue that in the modern times by means of modern tools and techniques of management, a person can give good organizations irrespective his/her own inner virtue. But I assert that in the long run, the personal image of the person is reflected in the work place and it will be copied by the followers. Thus, it is merely like searching the scent by the deer in the outside world where as it possesses it. It can be affirmed that a reprobate cannot give a good organization to the people; instead he/she impairs the very basis of a good organizations.
In conclusion, social reform or any other positive change should rightly be started from the inner self or from the individual rather than searching the goodness in the others or imposing the same to the others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...r situation in the long run. Some may argue that in the modern times by means of mo...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... scent by the deer in the outside world where as it possesses it. It can be affirmed tha...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'organization'?
Suggestion: organization
...he/she impairs the very basis of a good organizations. In conclusion, social reform or any o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, then, third, thus, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2815.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 568.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95598591549 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85894623449 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454225352113 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6357028193 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.72 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238885358249 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616017949817 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590815807082 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122260333723 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490922551293 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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