As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Nowadays, most of the people are job holders and the most important part of life is being spent on their works. However, it is impossible to say that workers of all the levels are satisfied .From my point of view, there are many factors which contribute to job satisfaction.
It is clear from the question that many people in the world spent their adult life by doing different kinds of jobs. The only thing is that all people must be happy and satisfied with their jobs to make themselves physically fit, mentally healthy and socially adjustable.
Regarding job satisfaction, there are many factors which can play a crucial role. Some of them are attractive salary, rank, team spirit, reward, promotion, good working environment, democratic leadership and so on. In other words, we will be satisfied when all these factors support in work places.
For all workers, we cannot expect about the job satisfactions as there is large discrimination between workers. However, some employees can be satisfied in terms of salary they receive whereas others may be in position. In fact, it is very difficult to make all the workers happy and we cannot even think about it due to hierarchy in all types of jobs.
To summarize, all the workers may not be satisfied with their jobs. It is true that job satisfaction helps the individual be mentally, physically and socially fit and healthy. Personally speaking, workers with high job satisfaction tend to have happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, in fact, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72624550766 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6933760478 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6153846154 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341024755417 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125615580666 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812063584426 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195916120992 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763003984997 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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