Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nation. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the needier nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some issues that related to human such as health, education, or trade are a negotiable matter since the down of time. Throughout history, it is a hot issue that wealthy governments should have more sense of responsibility to helping poor nations or not. It is agreed that affluent nations send their aids to the poorer country. This argument will be proven by looking at how increasing the level of health, education and trade has an important impact on needier nations level of living.
For one, every person from richer country has this duty to help poorer countries like Africa. Some well-known people such as athletes or actor/actress like Messy except responsibility of some children in the needier country that suffers from famine or fatal diseases. As this show, it can have beneficial effect on their health and trade.
In addition to this, governments can result to make up their country's people sense of responsibilities to help them. An instance illustrating this in action is that destroying famine from nations can aid them a lot; It has a direct relation with health and education. Thus, helping to poorer nations develops their level of health, education and better communication of countries.
Following this look at how richer countries can have an advantageous impact on needier nation health, education and can have a useful impact on poorer nation's health, education and level of living. It has been proven that it is not only athletes, actor/actress but also duty of usual people to have a sense of responsibility to poorer nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, thus, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08171206226 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84398801003 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513618677043 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4109126979 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319393150854 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125575123752 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684076765466 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205462356261 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624313604227 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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