The environment we live in is in danger. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?
Nowadays, the question “who is responsible for environmental crisis?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that considering some efficient methods to preserving the ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must propose numerous solution to maintain environment.
To begin with, it is a common view that finding the causes of environmental polution plays a vital role in each society. First and foremost is that the toxic gases are emited from destructive vehicle as well as the lethal gases are spreaded from factories can be the most crucial crisis of the environment. Secondly, it can be argued that the increasing range of heat in the world leads to melting the ice caps in both poles and subsequently, the sea level will be raised. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that an extensive range of health problems, such as skin cancer that are proceed from destruction of ozone layer can be another challenge. A group of environmentalists, working at prestigious universities conducted that sea and rivers are being contaminated by harmful chemicals.
However, there is no doubt that both the government and individuals are responsible for these problems. It should be taken into account that the government must offer loans to the factories to move to the less beautiful area as well as raise the public awareness by free booklets and educational sessions. Moreover, people should be encourage people to leave their private cars at home and use the public transport systems
To recapitulate, I entirely believe that some useful action must be taken into account to eliminate the environmental crisis. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legistlation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proceeded'.
Suggestion: proceeded
... problems, such as skin cancer that are proceed from destruction of ozone layer can be ...
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Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...al sessions. Moreover, people should be encourage people to leave their private cars at h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome and use the public transport systems To recapitulate, I entirely believe that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25901639344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08095553678 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4606195576 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.818181818 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.042690254695 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181594606077 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257075640143 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.024250946281 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176070515049 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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