The diagram below shows a simple device for changing sea water to drinking water.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram informs a simple-equipment for converting sea water to drinking water.
In general, sea water should be converting to be drinking water first before consuming by humans.
So, humans will not be ill or get problems which are from sea water. This process begins with the entering of the sea water to the dome through the small hole in the bottom. In the top, the sunlight gives the light to the dome which makes sea water evaporate and go up to the roof of the dome. The results of this process, the water flows into rim. Then, the wall of the dome collects drinking water. Finally, the drinking water is sent to floating solar by clear plastic dome to keep the cleaning of the water.
In short, this process takes many steps to change the sea water becomes safely drinking water. As a result, the water will be safe to consume by people who need it.
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