Are the cars damaging the environment? Should the number of cars be restricted to one for one family? Give your views and support your views with appropriate examples.
Nowadays, the moot question “whether the cars are damaging the environment or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that keeping a balance between the number of cars and the population in order to diminish the environmental pollution is highly beneficial, whereas one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that safe and reasonable number of vehicles play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the toxic gases are emitted from an extensive range of cars, especially defective cars threaten our health and leads to a wide variety of diseases, such as heart attack, lung cancer, and respiratory illnesses. Secondly, it can be argued that the ecosystem and wildlife will be endangered. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the destruction of the ozone layer is another challenge that leads to skin cancer. A group of scientists, working at prestigious university conducted that India is suffering from traffic congestion that rooted in huge numbers of cars, causes lack of park space, and brings a lot of noise for people.
Therefore, some informed decision must be taken to address this crisis. One possible approach is to hold educational courses to raise public awareness that one car is adequate for a family. The other alternative solution is to obtain tough laws for those who are still using defective vehicles. Lastly, the government should produce convenient public transport systems as well as Eco-friendly fuels.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that the number of cars must be decreased. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce a strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he environment or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13099041534 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92412740543 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635782747604 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4431085653 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251723517967 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069247048221 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569153626585 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130670646933 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389451562624 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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