Do you have to plan for the future? Or stay focused on our present? What is your opinion and why?
Provide examples to support your stand.
It is often been said that planning for future is very important to succeed in one’s life. People’s opinions differ as to whether having a future plan is needed or only to focus on what is going on currently. However, as per my belief, one should have both long term and short term future planning. This essay will explain how future can be bright if planned properly for future.
To begin with, one cannot see what they are going to achieve by only putting focus on the activities currently being done. The reason is that they cannot decide whether those actions will help them to reach their final goal or not. For instance, psychologists at Barcelona University state that one cannot achieve expected outcome of their actions if they act haphazardly without a proper plan. Therefore, it is of extreme importance for me to have a concrete plan to work towards my future goals.
To continue, people who plan their goals carefully, can effectively plan their time and actions that are very much needed to fulfil their future aspirations. This is because, it gives a clear picture as to which activities are needed to reach their ultimate goal. One of the best examples is the life of Nicole Kidman, an Australian actress. Her dream is to become a famous actress and she knew that it is impossible to materialize in a short period and that she has to work step-by-step with cautious future planning and with one, made her dreams come true. Thus, inspired by those famous personalities, I prepared a clear plan for my future endeavors.
To summarize, one should have clear goal and a carefully plotted plan to fulfil one’s dream. I too have near future and distant future plans, which are aligned to my goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...s;s life. People's opinions differ as to whether having a future plan is needed or only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8255033557 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57666556642 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8504485123 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191786127949 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763961314509 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533160077926 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131923386974 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047084709932 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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