Some countries encourage teenagers to have a part time job to see it is a good thing, while others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this modern world due to rising competition in each and every field of work give rise to problems such as unemployment, and in order to fulfill needs of the family teenagers are encouraged to do a job even if it is a part time. Although some argue it is a good idea, while others have opposite beliefs. This essay will discuss both these views.
To begin with, those who hold contradictory views proposes several reasons for it. First and foremost, is due to the fact that they are tender and immature it is really possible they can get hurt. For example, youngsters doing manual labor are prone to injuries, and sometimes ending up with disastrous consequences such as losing a limb. Also, it is true that many are abused by other workers. Apart from this, its not their age to work rather it is a period of enjoyment. Lastly child labour is against law.
Having said this, there a tremendous benefits as well. By working early not only they will gain valuable work experience which is extremely important for their future career, but it also helps in acquiring skills for instance, socialization, communication and confidence which are fundamental for their progression into sound adult. Furthermore, by doing so they will be able to support their families and possibly economy of the country as well.
To conclude, though there are advantages of adopting such a policy both at individual level, and for countries as well, and drawbacks as well. In my opinion, positive effects do not out weigh side effects, and policymakers make laws to end this practice as it may lead to life threatening disadvantages. In the future, due to rise in inflation rates this trend will continue to flourish unless effective measures are not taken to stop it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... encouraged to do a job even if it is a part time. Although some argue it is a good idea,...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...used by other workers. Apart from this, its not their age to work rather it is a pe...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
... Having said this, there a tremendous benefits as well. By working early not only they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, really, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71633740336 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6347923802 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154482150672 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496037968196 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638921271903 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994335210425 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115056714782 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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