as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree
The ideas that, besides making money, enterprises have to public responsibilities. My opinion, while producing generate profit have an important role to play. I agree with the opinion that they must be responsibilities for society.
On the one hand, the efforts to earns profits have negative effects on the general public. firstly, if income from businesses operation increase, the taxes pay for governments will higher. authorities may use the money for key filed such as education, health, as a result, the living standard is improved. secondly, by earning the huge profit, they have the opportunity to grow business. for example, they can expand production to create new job opportunities within the community.
On the other hand, there is a variety of reason why firms must have responsible for communities. first reason, activation of businesses have a direct effect on the environment. releasing pollutant stemming from factory emissions or the irresponsible disposal of industrial waste. For example, if factories install waste treatment system, instead of directly disposal into the sea or the river, the environment will be protected. another reason, the big companies should help those who are less fortunate, since they have money to do. for example, Universe and Vinamilk are two big firms have enhanced their public image through philanthropic action such as providing scholarships and giving charities donation.
In conclusion, although I believe that making profits have an important role to play, I would argue that all business must contribute to the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ns profits have negative effects on the general public. firstly, if income from businesses ope...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...negative effects on the general public. firstly, if income from businesses operation in...
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Authorities
... taxes pay for governments will higher. authorities may use the money for key filed such as...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...esult, the living standard is improved. secondly, by earning the huge profit, they have ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... have the opportunity to grow business. for example, they can expand production to ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... must have responsible for communities. first reason, activation of businesses have a...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Releasing
...ave a direct effect on the environment. releasing pollutant stemming from factory emissio...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...ver, the environment will be protected. another reason, the big companies should help t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4693877551 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0171410902 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661224489796 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8995354851 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185508769191 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642094579692 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613724162036 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120852056785 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391458333329 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.