You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
* introduce yourself
* explain what is wrong with the furniture
* say what action you would like the landlord to take
10 February 2018
Dear Sir or Madam,
I rent a flat according to the lease contract 231/17 of 10 July 2017. I am writing to report numerous problems with some pieces of furniture in the rented flat. I would like to request assistance in remedying the situation.
To start with, here is a short introduction. I am a tenant and live in the three-bedroom flat which is located on Buckleigh Street, 12, with my family which consists of my wife, two children and a cat. We have been living there since last Summer, which was when we made our lease agreement.
Next, let me provide an explanation of the three major issues regarding the furniture that I feel are wrong. To begin with, the table in the kitchen is relatively small for our family; moreover, all four chairs in the kitchen are old and creaks; and, finally, the sofa in the living room has recently broken: one of its front legs has broken down into two parts.
Given the gravity of the situation, I would be immensely grateful if you could make the necessary arrangements to provide me with following: first, to replace the current table with a bigger one; second, to change all chairs with newer ones; and, third, to repair the sofa or give the information about whether it is allowed to repair it by myself. I would genuinely appreciate if action were taken as fast as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you at the soonest opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Evgeny Ivashko (Mr)
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...as broken down into two parts. Given the gravity of the situation, I would be...
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...on, I would be immensely grateful if you could make the necessary arrangements to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, third, i feel, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72265625 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58417554683 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4826178031 44.8134815571 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175554434316 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547007079848 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037263435021 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658718781826 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318003126867 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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