Some people think that communication in family members becoming less as compared to past some dont feel that so. On which extent do you agree or disagree?
Life style has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, In this jet era of 21st century, connection among family
members is decreasing day by day as compared to early time asserted by a plethora of people. However others do not realise that problem. Here I would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost ,Success has become an ultimate goal that most of the people desire to achieve, for that they work round the clock. Thus, they ignore their family and don't get sufficient time for interaction.
In addition to, The presence of aristocratic life style ays a vital role for this biggest menance. To be specific, in this dazzling world everyone wants to live a luxury life with ravishing houses,carswith astonishing features, laptops etc. Therefore these mighty aspirations allure them towards abroad. Hence, they get less time for their blood relations.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, generation gaps among family members are responsible for this threat. Asin the past people of different ages respected their family and give importance to their views and idea sbut in this furious life style young blood feel themselves superior from grey people. As a result, they want to spent their time with their friends or in peer groups instead of their parents. Apart from it, youngsters want to live at some places such as pubs, bars, hotels, gyms, yoga centers.so that they can have time for their dear ones.
To conclude,family plays a remarkable role in anyone life so everyone has to maintain time for work and for love ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01094890511 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57739954962 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4521984479 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121635710992 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353229562614 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329457873785 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568383778082 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291110596993 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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