You did a one day course in a local college but you are happy about it.
In this letter tell principal about
Detail of the course
Why you unhappy
Give some suggestion
Dear Mr. smith
I am writing this letter in reference to having some issues regarding computer class. Which I have been attended in your college yesterday.
As you already know that it was a basic course class and timings were 9.00am to 2.00pm.all students reached in time as they were so exited for this course. When we gathered in computer room tuitor was not present . Not only he was 2 hours late but also behaved rudely with the students. Apart from it , computer sets were not sufficient as well as sitting arrangement were not proper .
You are requested to, provide single computer set to each students so that , all will accumulate a great deal of knowledge in one day course. Secondly, guide the tuitor for proper dealing with students. Your college is prominent and these kind of dealings are not fruitfull .
Now I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi ghai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. smith I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s they were so exited for this course. When we gathered in computer room tuitor wa...
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...xited for this course. When we gathered in computer room tuitor was not present ...
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... in computer room tuitor was not present . Not only he was 2 hours late but also b...
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...udely with the students. Apart from it , computer sets were not sufficient as we...
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...ufficient as well as sitting arrangement were not proper . You are requested ...
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... not proper . You are requested to, provide single computer set to each stud...
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...ill accumulate a great deal of knowledge in one day course. Secondly, guide the...
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...knowledge in one day course. Secondly, guide the tuitor for proper dealing wit...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
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...these kind of dealings are not fruitfull . Now I am looking forward to hearing...
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...g forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Urvashi ghai
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...o hearing from you. Yours sincerely Urvashi ghai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9025974026 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46206935943 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720779220779 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3530791161 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148182818417 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469653207879 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507955690589 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960039122504 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217073460527 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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