You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
>say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
>explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
>suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Kaushal,
I am here writing you, about my opinion regarding your last letter I received where you were asking for suggestion on your future plan ( Either go for further studies or opt a job option). I won't have any doubt about your dedication and hard work towards your studies, but as you already completed your graduation ( Engineering in Computer Science) from the prestigious University of the country, you will get the job offer according to your expectation.
First of all, as per current situation, you really need to earn money to pay the debt which you have taken for your studies. I am sure the burden of debt amount always annoy you, and you will not be able to concentrate towards your studies as much as you can without any tension. Moreover, higher education is more beneficial with some work experience in the relevant field. After getting the job experience you will be more transparent towards your area of interest.
We both worked together on the same team during your internship period, as I got your feedback from your supervisor that you were exceptionally good in Java programming. As per my suggestion, you should make your professional career towards programming engineer. In addition, you completed you graduate with good grades, so you will get the preference to get any job.
I am confident in your ability and your decision. This is just my suggestion, hope this will help you to choose your way.
yours sincerely,
Pallavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sking for suggestion on your future plan Either go for further studies or opt a j...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as you already completed your graduation Engineering in Computer Science from the...
^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... work experience in the relevant field. After getting the job experience you will be ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...is will help you to choose your way. yours sincerely, Pallavi
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, really, regarding, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94331983806 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71355350365 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4709236788 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265898127583 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107865556515 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658359018118 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178918704783 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630675933634 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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