More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
It is getting increasingly desirable and significant for a rising number of people to deem fashionable clothing as very important. Therefore, a question on the impact of this trend is being raised often. According to my experiences, knowledge and exposure, I strongly believe, that it’s a healthy development and following are some of the reasons for me to think so.
Utility justifies fashion very well when it comes to personal happiness and self-value. Man is a social animal and always loves to be liked and praised. Wearing fashionable clothes is an effort to show oneself as a confident person and the joy which a person can get from the confidence and appreciation justify such fashionable clothes even if they are expensive.
Change is always required and keeping pace with fashion in clothing pushes a continuous and visible change rather evolution is a person’s image. The people from all age groups, who follow fashion in their wearable, enjoy more attention from their because they avoid looking same and boring. Hence, wearing fashionable clothes is virtue for everyone.
Human civilization has experienced a constant evolution since the very beginning and fashion has played a crucial role in this process. To satisfy human creativity, people make and wear different styles of clothes and this is the part of human which culture continues its evolution in a never-ending fashion. In the absence, of fashion in clothes, there will be more development in this component of our culture.
In conclusion, I must add that there are some advantages and disadvantages of wearing fashionable clothes but it is also a positive attitude in our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23048327138 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97413568354 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.116023997 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318277863336 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103635360731 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704664724542 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16481972972 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304617083828 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.