1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of producers to avoid over-packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example of your own experience.
Nowadays, consumers are offered over packed products, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be agreed that consumers should avoid these over packaged products, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that producers are solely responsible for this problem. In my opinion, consumers should overlook these over packed products as these are a waste of money.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why consumers should avoid over packed products and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they get carried away by the flashy packaging of the products. As an illustration, we have seen many children get fascinated by the games which come under colored box wraps and appeal to their eyes. Moreover, these products are not even really needed by them and overburden their parent's pockets. Therefore, consumers should avoid these over packed products and minimize their expenses.
Nevertheless, there is another side, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of over packed products and the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that producers bombard the consumers with these kinds of products. For instance, producers deceive people by selling counterfeit or low-quality products under these high-cost packaging. Furthermore, it increases their cost of production and even suffers a major loss. Thus, producers should avoid creating confusion in the minds of people regarding the over packaged products.
In light of the discussion above, it can be concluded that the impact of over packed products is prominent and the way they are presented to the general public should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41603053435 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69576183458 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1153283621 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345458222028 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147639153092 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890428708607 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2249223798 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568629094955 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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