Some people prefer to live in house while others feel that there are more advantages to live in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared withliving in an apartment.
Life style has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, a house is thought to be a most suitable place to live asserted by a sheer percentage of people. On the contrary, others have conflicting views. They considered apartment as a best Space to live instead of house. Here I would like to describe the merits of houses which outweighed its demerits by comparison with apartment.
To begin with, there are many solid reasons supporting the significance of houses. Initially, presence of houses offers people to lead their life with freedom. To be specific, people live in houses do not have privacy concerns. Therefore, they can relish each and every golden moment with their dear ones. Consequently, houses enrich them with emence pleasure through out the life. Apart from it, they can welcome their kith and kins with warm hearted as they donot bother anout space.
Secondly, they can explore various activities such as gardening, dancing, stitching, painting, yoga and music classes etc. Thus, plenty of area in house plays a phenomenal role to uplift the standard of knowledge as well as recreation.
Further, emphasizing on my point of view. houses represents the aristocratic life style of a person. For instance, people construct houses according to their budget and requirement. They decorate their houses with modern facilities like shower, bathtubs, swimming pool, altramodern kitchen, fabulous security system. Thence, they accumulate a great deal of respect from others because of their status. As a result, role of houses to reveal Social status is beyond comparison.
However, there are exceptional benefits of living in house but we can not underestimate the valuable role of an apartment. In this fast and furious lifestyle people donot have time to pay attention on the maintenance of houses. Hence, apartment are the best choice for working people. On the other hand, people living in apartments have no security issues .all the buildings are well occupied with the third eye of cctv's.
To conclude, both aspects have their own significance but houses are the most convenient place to live where one can live on their own rights and rules.
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but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21468926554 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69460728558 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59604519774 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6829309349 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225508629486 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650355810031 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664595840505 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124607202303 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559927953771 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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