Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
The debate over television has become an essential part of life is an old one, with attitudes of people shifting throughout the debate over the years. Proponents and opponents make their cases to support their views on this contagious issue. In my opinion, TV plays a pivotal role in every aspect of human life.
There are deluge of arguments in favor of my stance, but the most preponderant one is that TV keep people informed with the events happening in the world, be it local, national or international. Moreover, TV keeps people abreast with the ever-changing world and creates general interest among them about other languages and cultures. Statistics from credible sources have revealed that television can add much-needed recreation and entertainment to make people feel relax from their hectic life. To elaborate further, few pertinent examples can be taken into consideration. According to the startling research, many sports program are watched by youngsters to relax and enjoy themselves. So it will not be wrong to say that it has become a growing trend to see people relying on television as source of information and recreation.
On the other side of the fence, it is also possible to make an opposing case. It can be argued that television have also some negative impact on the young children. Critics also believed that there are deluge of programme on television which shows violence and sexual activities that can affect the minds of children. However, those who advocate this viewpoint, fail to see the picture in a larger context.
In the view of arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that the benefits of television are indeed too great to ignore
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...very aspect of human life. There are deluge of arguments in favor of my stance, but...
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Suggestion: deluges
...n. Critics also believed that there are deluge of programme on television which shows ...
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...evision are indeed too great to ignore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07194244604 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78605888553 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1266448134 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126179838728 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398557434316 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445709364934 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729584355979 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719636343128 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.