What is the best invention of the last 100 years: computer, antibiotics, airplane? Explain why.
The importance of computer, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of computer as a best invention has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on society in recent times. This essay will elaborate how people can share information by using computer and how computer have created problems in our society and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why computer has become important now a days, but the most conspicuous one stem from the fact is that people can easily share and store huge amount of information around the world by using computer. Moreover, computer is playing significant role for education and businesses. For example, many universities and schools in different countries are using computer for learning purposes. Hence, computer has greater impact on society with its benefits.
However, there remain some drawbacks; the most notable one is that computer can create privacy issues for people which can cause negative impact on human behavior. As an illustration, people can hack personal information from the computers of other people. Therefore, computer has some negative effects on the society
In the view of arguments outline above, it can be concluded that computer is the best invention in last 100 years and its benefits are indeed too great to ignore.
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- Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lostwith globalisation or its significance will increase with globalisation?What is your opinion? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30493273543 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76016163075 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3869514287 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707504561722 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300659326111 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445824849646 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061153516325 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633551539138 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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