It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is undoubtedly a prominent landmark in everyone's life. In this regard, one the most significant issues is choosing the right age to start a new family. Some people argue that single persons should marry before turning 30. The truth is that marrying after that age can benefit not only individuals but also the society, not least in terms of satisfaction in life and financial status.
On the top of the list of delayed marriage merits is the durability of a couple's life. Initially challenging though getting married at higher age might be, these people are fully mature and more experienced and have better social skills to form a family in comparison with those marrying at a younger age. In this way, couples are more capable of taking over responsibilities and encountering the problems coming up during their lives. The added benefit is that the divorce rate will diminish as a result of an enduring marriage, leading to having a healthier and happier society.
Look at from an economic point of view, late matrimony can also be an opportunity for young people to provide basic requirements to meet a desirable family life, like the living accommodation and a permanent income, to name but a few. At first blush, it might be considered very time consuming for most young people to be able to afford essential needs for establishing a family. But lack of financial preparation for starting a family, which is more probable between people under 30, can cause some acute problems and threaten the life of newlyweds. Individuals above that age usually have more profitable job and higher income allowing them to settle down and form a family more confidently and let them to create supportive atmosphere for their newly born children.
In the final analysis, the negative impacts of marrying before 30 far outweigh any perceived benefits. I, for one, subscribe to the view that marrying after the age of 30 can be fruitful for both the individuals and society. As a result, couples can experience a more long-lasting marriage and the number of stable families will increase in the society.
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantageous of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'couples'' or 'couple's'?
Suggestion: couples'; couple's
... marriage merits is the durability of a couples life. Initially challenging though gett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98016997167 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76550519859 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57223796034 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6993874883 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267668390953 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888737870854 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858005899525 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168744162563 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598083430332 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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