You have applied for a position in an international organization and you need to provide a reference letter. Write a letter to your former teacher asking him/her to write it for you.
- Give your full details.
- Describe the job that you are going to do there.
- Say why it is important to you.
Dear Ms. Adam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you in hope of asking a favor.
Last month, I graduated in Software Engineering at SFU University. First of all, I should say without your help, I could not complete my master's thesis, thank you so much for your guidance. Twice a week ago, I applied for a vacancy job as Fuzzy designer in international company. This company is famous for design Fuzzy devices like washing mashing and so on. As you know, my whole researches and my thesis are about Fuzzy system. I think I am totally eligible for this job, I can design new devices which using Fuzzy. Besides, I do some researches to improve functionality of current devices that using Fuzzy.
I am very grateful, if you can write a recommendation letter for me and mention my abilities and my researches. I always want be a designer in a big company and design new devices that can help to people to have more easily life. I want to continue way of professor Zade and develop Fuzzy in every field.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
M. Mino.
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- Some people say that school studies are not useful and most important things are learnt outside the school Do you agree or disagree Give your opinion and examples 85
I can design new devices which using Fuzzy.
I can design new devices which use Fuzzy.
I can design new devices which are using Fuzzy.
I always want be a designer
I always want to be a designer
to have more easily life.
to have more easy life.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 190 200
No. of Characters: 830 1000
No. of Different Words: 110 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.713 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.368 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.632 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.182 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.408 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.192 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4