Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
With the advent of technological development, the distance between the country has been abridged. Improved transportation and shipping ways have greatly impacted the human life. I totally agree with the statement given. My essay will depict my reasoning for my perspectives.
The First and foremost reason, the latest transportation and shipping development has brought globalization in the country. Considering our past, there was only one way of doing any transaction with other country and that was shipping, that too used to take months or sometimes years to export or import any goods. Nowadays, with the motorized ships and airplane, a country can export its product to another country in few hours. For example, few days back, I had ordered from my country India, a Pirates costume for my son's birthday party using the online shopping site Amazon, the seller was from different country China, and I got my son's birthday dress in next 3 days. As a result, my son was really happy to have his pirates costume, which was his favorite on his birthday. I can't think of this would have been possible without enhanced transportation system in the world.
Besides globalization, it has brought family members closer to each other, who are staying in the different country. People have to travel from one country to another for several reasons: it could be work, higher education or something else. But with the transportation being so helpful and smooth in moving across the country, this dream of working or studying in the different country from your own has really able to take shape. For instance, my cousin, who is studying in the USA was really willing to come back home for the Diwali festival, in this special festival all family members prefer to meet and celebrate this function by staying together. Even my cousin's mother wants her to be home on occasion, but my cousin's semester exam was going on and the last exam was one day before the Diwali. So, she booked her ticket for the flight which was on the same day when was her last exam, she could make to home for Diwali as the flight took one day to reach India from the USA. Thus, she celebrated the festival among her family members and everyone was quite happy with her presence. This example also displays the closeness among family member which has brought by the modern transportation system.
In Conclusion, with the reasons stated above in my essay make it very clear that modern transportation and shipping has really proved as a boon to country's economic and cultural growth.
It has played a pivotal role in making the world a better place to live.
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- TOEFL integrated writing: Altruism. 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 782, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ich was his favorite on his birthday. I cant think of this would have been possible ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87946428571 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60110832318 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5993470109 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12667167834 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524528420344 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838870760207 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127124675194 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110288003614 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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