The given chart show the information about the percentage of youngster in various countries in 2002 and 2007
the given chart illustrate the youngster in particular university in the given period of two different years in 2002 and 2007
It can be seen that in Italy,the highest proportion of youngster was observed in 2007 which was 52% which was only 38% in 2002.the same trend can be seen in Uk and Poland where young people was high in 2007 as compared to 2000.In Uk,it was noticed 46% in 2002 and 54% after 7 years the proportion of youngster increased from 64% to 78% in the given time period.Next,two countries Spain,the difference of the proportion of youngster was only 5%,but there was minor difference in the Norway.it was suprising to see that in Finland the proportion was similar 70% in both years
Overall,it is visible that in Italy,Uk,Poland showed similar trend where youngster was high in 2007.however the percentage of Spain was noticed opposite trend
- It is often said that children learn best by observing the behaviour of their adults and copy itTo what extent do you think the given statement is right 61
- The given chart show the information about the percentage of youngster in various countries in 2002 and 2007 56
- some people think that the papers and coins will be replaced completely by online method of payment in the near future do you agree or disagree with the statement 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93835616438 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89900850782 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 146.0 22.4926829268 649% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 721.0 112.824112599 639% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 146.0 22.9334400587 637% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 5.23603664747 592% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206118084642 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206118084642 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189373722561 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879321241067 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 74.8 13.2329268293 565% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -59.79 61.2550243902 -98% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 57.9 10.3012195122 562% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.8 8.06136585366 171% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 60.4 10.9970731707 549% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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