Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cellphone) or a service (e.g medical treatment) do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, due to the rising inflation and lower incomes than ever before, cost of goods is the most important factor people usually consider when going shopping or requesting services. While I accept that the price of products is effective in selecting them, I do not agree to attach a great importance to services' price.
On the one hand, I believe that it is reasonable to take the price of products into account as a determining variable for purchase. Consumer goods such as clothes or electrical devices just to name a few, are bought regularly by people. Therefore, it will be not economical if they spend a large amount of money to buy them each time. For instance, the price of cellphone, as one of the most common products sold daily, should be reasonable enough; neither so cheap that leads to poor quality, nor prohibitively expensive that is not value for money. Having considered the price of goods when buying, people are able to manage their cost of living properly and avoid extravagance, resulting in saving up money gradually, to spend at more valuable situations like investment.
On the other hand, price cannot be considered as the most significant factor to choose a service. In spite of consumer goods, receiving services is typically once in a while, meaning that people do not need to spend money for them regularly. Thus, in my opinion, in such situations, the quality of presented services is much more important than their cost. In particular, when it comes to services like medical treatment, which is directly associated with individual's health, the quality has a vital role to play. In fact, under no condition should people sacrifice their safety for spending less money.
In conclusion, although it is often acceptable to consider the price of goods to buy them, in my view, this is not true to put cost of services ahead of their quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... their safety for spending less money. In conclusion, although it is often accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, in my opinion, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70413456581 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2655212085 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312140291652 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102034983841 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584776099247 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198319503823 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616508433105 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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