Some people believe that the country becomes interesting and develop fast if there is mixture of different cultures and nationalities. To extent do you agree or disagree .
Every country needs to develop faster. In country there are various culture people live. Therefore, some of the masses believe that the country grow faster when its population invites distinct nationalities and their cultures. I formally agree with this statement.
Population plays a vital role in the growth of the nation. To begin with, if the people of nation is well educated and they ikeout higher opportunities in different nation's they help in the growth of the country. Moreover, the different nationalities of distinct nations also play a important role in the country. When the various multinational companies set up in our country and may contribute in the faster development of the nation.
Furthermore, if culture of any nation is rich which makes it more interesting nation. For instance, India is a country of secular people, where every religion people have their own culture and also said that India has richest traditional culture. India become more interesting because of its rich culture. In India mainly four religions people live in distinct states and every religion have its own rich culture and also varied festivals. To be specifiy, the culture of state Punjab in India is very interesting that attracts the nationalities of various nations. It's food, dresses, surroundings, and relations among people.
On the other hand, some short sighted people believe that the culture or distinct nationalities do not play any role in the development of any nation. They believe that the development of any nations depends upon the economic growth of that country, the services where as facilities are provided by that nation.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion, it is evident that distinct nationalities and culture made the nation more interesting and developing but there's certain situations where it's not play vital role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29054054054 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83644592634 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6103153689 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1176470588 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206544279063 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817468391946 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528493775132 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13120289662 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553438646909 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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