You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful.
Dear Mr. Wong,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the immaculate service and organising the unforgettable 90th birthday of my grandfather. I am very content with your service. The event was on 21st of February in the main ballroom. There were over 100 guests, mainly being elderly friends of my grandfather and a few younger family members.
I really appreciate the special attention given to the guests. The ballroom was conveniently accessible from the parking lot. For some of the guests that used wheelchairs were able to join with comfort thanks to the ramps located at the entrance. Additionally, the theme of the party was well thought of and comfortable seats made it relaxing for the guests to enjoy their time. The highlight of the night was the food and people enjoyed it a lot.
Furthermore, I would like to thank your team for their adequate care, especially “Lily” who went out of the way and helped in making this event memorable.
I am now your loyal customer and I will surely recommend your hotel to my friends as well.
Yours sincerely,
- birthday 11
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- birthday 11
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ly accessible from the parking lot. For some of the guests that used wheelchairs were able ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9247311828 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83130755354 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4645008037 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210104233608 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599278676128 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503796446876 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968869625607 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719020836326 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.