Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the wide spread of mass media such as television and Internet, It is extremely easy and convenient for us to get informed. Even thought some events are unlikely to affect our life, it is also exceedingly important to know. Taking care various events can help us expand our outlook and helpus do some preferation previously.
Being mindful of events happening around the world is able to open our mind. With the widely use of technology, the information and knowledge are update quickly. In order to keep pace of the change of information and acquire more knowledge, we should know about current events not matter they do not affect our life. For example, I keep on watching newspaper everyday. I know much about information about foreign countries. Although i am far away from these countries, caring abount about events abount their countries helps me learn more abount their country culture.
With knowing events happening around the world, we can make earier preferations for travling. Nowadays, the majority people pefer to going to other countries. The unavoidable thing is to konw something about the city or the country where they are going to go, like the weather and housing. Only keep in touch with these associated events can we do full preferation and eventrually enjoy the trip. Obviously, even if the events happing in other places and unlikely have certain impact on our life, we have to get them in some cases.
Surely, spending the large amount of time reading news is a waste of time, resulting from these events are probable to not affect our daily life. Howeven, for some people, especially students, it would take time to read news than planing computer games.
In a word, since we can increase our scale of knowledge and enable us to do some preferarion, it is no doubt to keep informed aboubt events which unlikely have a tremendous effect on ouor daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, for example, no doubt, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89408099688 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54584425457 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4102783245 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249774798721 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083240955986 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639993672019 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138894810348 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459559903327 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.