Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
When people do the crime, they must do their time. Although, severity of crime is essential to consider. Some expertise believe death penalty is imperative to control violence in society, whereas others disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss, death sentences is not vital to reduce crime, and in some cases it is the best outcome considering societies wellbeing.
Firstly, in order to maintain peace and harmony in the society, people need to work collectively. People who have committed crime should be punished, but the degree of punishment should be based upon level of resentment felt after doing the crime and willingness to change their behaviour and attitude. Death row is not crucial, if a person has the potential to become a better citizen and reflect on his wrong doings. Thus, it can be said capital punishment is not always required to make society better place to live in.
Secondly, capital punishment is till practiced in many counties such as, India, Indonesia, United States of America, etc. Some individual’s have extremely destructive minds. For example, people committing crime against humanity and Genocide should be hanged to death. People with monstrous mind are capable of executing mass crimes and such behaviour is irreversible and cannot be corrected in any rehabilitation centres or jail. Therefore, it can be said death penalty is essentially in some cases.
To conclude, this essay discussed, why capital punishment is not always the solution and in some scenarios it is exigent. In my opinion, capital punishment should be considered when crime against humanity is concerned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... do the crime, they must do their time. Although, severity of crime is essential to cons...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c. Some individual's have extremely destructive minds. For example, people c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30888030888 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84621724043 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8088225755 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 2.75862068966 471% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203061557475 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672647807626 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629077387986 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133208001473 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615404941783 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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