The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure demonstrates the process of generating electricity in the plant by using geothermal energy.
It is apparent that electricity generated from raw material cold water includes five continually steps, which involved thermotic process. To begin with, a large amount of cold water is pumped down beneath the ground by roughly 4.5 kilometers, reaching the entrance of the injection well.
After cold water pass through hot rocks area known as geothermal zone, the water become extremely hot. In the third stage, hot water is pumped up immediately via the production well into a massive condenser. After hot water is cooled down by the condenser, the product of steam enters the turbine through the cabin.
Then the heated steam activates the turbine to start rotating. Finally, the rotating turbine gives power to the generator which can yield our final product, electricity. Furthermore, the generator transmits the power to pylon before sending the electricity to national grid.
- The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. 78
- QuestionThe bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the plant by using geothermal energy. It is apparent that electricity generate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, then, third, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44871794872 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71116715649 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8656840303 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0164228652095 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00793824379109 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.014895775583 0.0843802449381 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0144792174714 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158761842208 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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