You lost some valuables during a train journey. Write a letter to the station manager requesting his/her help in finding your lost items.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to report lost property. My name is XYZ and I was traveling from Chennai to Madurai on the Pandian Express seat number 5A/C lower berth on the 30th of December 2017. I boarded the train at 10:00 pm from Chennai railway station.
After reaching home, I found my wallet and mobile missing from my laptop bag which I later found had a broken zip. My wallet was coffee brown in color. It had a press lock and I had some cash, my driving license, and Aadhar card in it. Also, my mobile is a gold-colored iPhone 6S secured with a number lock. I kept the bag under the seat along with my luggage when I was sleeping.
I’d be grateful if you could kindly ask your security staffs and cleaners to thoroughly check the cabin and ensure if the items are on the train or in the railway station. Perhaps, it would be a good idea if you could check the CCTV footage. I was wearing a yellow salwar kamees. I have enclosed my photo with their letter so that you can identify me easily.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. You can contact me on 0091235647 anytime.
Thank you in advance for your time and support.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
... had a broken zip. My wallet was coffee brown in color. It had a press lock and I had some cas...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... so that you can identify me easily. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43981481481 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29901552707 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2645548218 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133367532861 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457368162782 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436493412457 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766199875375 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367502607029 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.