Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how is should be celebrated.
Write a letter to your friend.
Say what type of party should be held e.g themed,fancy dress,black tie event
Suggest a suitable venue
Make recommandation as to entertainment e.g Dj,jazz,band etc.
Dear John
Wishing you many happy birthday in advance!
I am writing this missive to offer you some suggestion to make your special day more memorable.
As you are going to enter on teenage, so, I would like to suggest to go for an themed party as our friend circle never had one and also give your party a unique taste. Ranjit-Avenue's Bombay house is thr best place to have one such kind of party as their staff are well trained in their job and prices are also very reasonable.
Having Dj aftrr some snacks will also give you respect in our friend circle, as dancing with girls will open up you asbteenager little bit and making your dream come true, so, planning to have Dj in your party is mandatory requirment.
I hope we will have blast in your party, waiting for your call.
Yours truly
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest going', 'suggest gonna'.
Suggestion: suggest going; suggest gonna
...o enter on teenage, so, I would like to suggest to go for an themed party as our friend circl...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
..., so, I would like to suggest to go for an themed party as our friend circle never...
^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'thr the best'.
Suggestion: thr the best
...e taste. Ranjit-Avenues Bombay house is thr best place to have one such kind of party as...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...with girls will open up you asbteenager little bit and making your dream come true, so, pl...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55405405405 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2091598276 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682432432432 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8694025812 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157882648976 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862604085607 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370431489169 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794856364489 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256945486918 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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