The pen is mightier than the sword
There is proverb saying that " The pen is mightier than the sword". Which means a person who is intellectually strong can able to fight with word and with non-violence while other believe that violence is can able to resolve the upcoming conflict. This essay will argue for why non-violence is greater than the violence.
There are several reasons why non-violence is best then the violence. One of them is that to bring moral values in the society, this can have a peace in the society. While, many countries are signing peace treaty with each to save the natural resource and human life. For example, The UN wants all country to be peaceful and not to use nuclear weapon with any country and also it has restriction for test the nuclear weapons.
While, those who argue that violence is the one the way to eliminate problems and conflicts. Many countries have advance weapon and technology to overcome any situation in the future. This might be required to fight against terrorism and other kind of conflict to save the common and innocent peoples. For example, peace and non-violence will not followed by everyone, anyone can break the rules and peace any point of time and thus it is requires to fight with modern weapons.
This essay discussed why non-violence is the greater than the violence. In my point of view "The pen is might than the sword" is absolutely true for resolving problem by non-violence and peaceful way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...re are several reasons why non-violence is best then the violence. One of them is that ...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... countries are signing peace treaty with each to save the natural resource and hu...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
...xample, peace and non-violence will not followed by everyone, anyone can break the rules...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fighting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fighting
...y point of time and thus it is requires to fight with modern weapons. This essay discu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88663967611 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62559269302 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0028027618 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148694346604 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688491558434 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139553789868 0.071462118173 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11463465308 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114750281742 0.0609392437508 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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