tpo-1 integrated writing;
In the lecture ,the professor makes a series of points that cast doubt on the all the arguments presented about the advantage of 4 days work week and states they won’t benefit the empolyees and companies.
First of all, the professor says, hiring new employees are costly and make the companies to spend more .He illustrates the companies may pay less for the less work hours but the health benefit and training and medical coverage for every new employees even who works less than others is the same and more workers needs more office spaces and more computers which means the companies have to spend more.This counters author’s claim.
Secondly,the professor believes the 4 days work week does not provide more jobs available in the market as the companies prefer to increase their expectations and force their worker to work more and overtime to cover all the work to prevent hiring of new employees which is costly. This makes no additional job to be created and also makes the current job unpleasant which is contradict with the writer’s point.
Lastly,the lecturer agrees with the more free time in 4 days work week but believes this more free time does not mean better quality of life and even the quality of life of these employees will decrease due to less stability in their job and less chances of advanced carrier and also in the economic downturns these employees are more prone to loose their job. This is completely counter the reading passage’s claim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In the lecture ,the professor makes a series of points t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doubt on the all the arguments presented about the advantage of 4 days work week ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tly and make the companies to spend more .He illustrates the companies may pay les...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...y and make the companies to spend more .He illustrates the companies may pay less ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e illustrates the companies may pay less for the less work hours but the health b...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... means the companies have to spend more.This counters author's claim. Second...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ounters author's claim. Secondly,the professor believes the 4 days work week...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
...kes the current job unpleasant which is contradict with the writer's point. Lastly...
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Suggestion: , the
... with the writer's point. Lastly,the lecturer agrees with the more free time...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... due to less stability in their job and less chances of advanced carrier and also in...
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Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...turns these employees are more prone to loose their job. This is completely counter t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94047619048 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55581126099 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 21.2450331126 198% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.291876421 49.2860985944 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.5 110.228320801 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 21.698381199 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06452816374 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.3589403974 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.0289183223 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.7273730684 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.498013245 179% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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