You are living in a rented apartment, but you have found some problems with the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should:
• say who you are
• explain the problems
• say what you want your landlord to do
Dear Sir
I am one your tenants and moved into your newly built flats last month in an apartment numbered 405. I am writing this epistle to tell you about the issues related to the furniture available in the room.
First of all, I am staying in a two-seater room and sharing it with another girl student. We both have to study during night hours but there is only one set of study table and chair. So, we are facing difficulty while studying as our study hours are same. Secondly, the lock of my cupboard is not working because I am having valuable items for example laptop and it is not safe to place such items openly.
I request you to fix the lock as soon as possible so that I can place my expensive things safely inside the wardrobe. Moreover, you mentioned in the rent agreement that you will provide study furniture so, arrange one more set of table and chair so that we do not have to suffer while doing our college work.
Your immediate response would be appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Malisa Morgan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54594594595 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28894507138 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.532684626 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198589209648 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734082022482 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570926401912 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115385781797 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670762039239 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.