A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase. A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say.
– What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it?
– Why do you need it back?
- What should he/ she do about it?
Dear Dhaval,
Hope you are doing well.
I writing to remind you about the suitcase which you have borrowed from me few months ago.
Remember the last time when you came to my house for Diwali celebrations. At that time, the lock functionality of your suitcase was destroyed at the airport while you were traveling from Mumbai to my home at Ahmedabad. While returning back to Mumbai, I landed you my suitcase for your journey. The suitcase is medium sized and black colored. Additionally, it has a name tag and a logo of "American Tourister" on front side.
Currently, I am in urgent need of my suitcase as I am traveling to Singapore for a company meeting with an overseas client. I have few bags with me but these are larger in size and it will not be feasible for me to carry such bags for a journey of two days only. I think my mid sized suitcase which you have will serve my purpose of journey.
Since you are coming to Ahmedabad after fifteen days to attend an engagement ceremony of our childhood friend Aakash, I request you to bring the suitcase for me. For any reason if it is not possible for you to come then please let me know in advance so that I can make some other arrangement. I hope this idea works for you.
See you soon.
Your's truly,
KG
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...Dear Dhaval, Hope you are doing well. I writing to remind you about the suitcas...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...m Mumbai to my home at Ahmedabad. While returning back to Mumbai, I landed you my suitcase for...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
.... I have few bags with me but these are larger in size and it will not be feasible for me to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46382978723 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59971792181 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4555223365 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250151794193 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962597684515 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854778612811 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171810592148 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850737850275 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.