One of your friends is going to visit your city for a short period. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
• tell him what time of the year is most suitable for sightseeing around the city
• describe some places that are worth visiting
• say how to find an inexpensive hotel
Dear Watson
I am overwhelmed after receiving your letter last week. I am fine and hope that you are also sailing on the same boat. I am penning this epistle in response to your missive as you are planning to visit Shimla.
Well, Shimla is a beautiful hill station and best time to visit this place is during the months of June and July. So, you should come to my city during that time of the year as at this time, temperature is cool while other parts the country bears hot climate. It is the best time to view the beauty of the place. There are many places to see in Shimla and famous of all is The Ridge. You can admire the beauty of the nature from here, beautiful mountains, trees and small houses of the people built by cutting the slopes of the hills.
Beside that there is a church, Jakhu temple and Indian Institute of Research and Technology. We will visit to Mall Road also which is famous for shopping. There are small shops and restaurants also to enjoy different tastes of food. We will have a nice time together. My family will be happy if you stay at my house with us. Although, if you are not comfortable, I will look for a cheap accommodation as many hotels are available nearby to my place.
Waiting for you to pay a visit to my place. Give my love to your children!!!
Yours truly
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you are also sailing on the same boat. I am penning this epistle in response to ...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'cheap accommodation'.
Suggestion: cheap accommodation
...ou are not comfortable, I will look for a cheap accommodation as many hotels are available nearby to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36032388664 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27183593285 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2768485096 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3125 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234424095295 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073693383099 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627980463099 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140781594713 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529284549574 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.