A successful man is not the one who has the ability to eliminate problems before they occur, but the one who can face the difficulties as they arise and solve them.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
The discussion on the measure of one's success by his abilities to face difficulties is a profound one. I completely agree with the statement and believe that the manner in which a person handles problems in life defines him.
Firstly, no one will disagree that prevention is better than cure, which means if one can ensure that problems do not originate in the first place, is definitely the most desirable thing. But everyone will agree that we do not live in a utopian world and there will be challenges and adverse situations in all walks of life.
Secondly, once one is aware that there is no end to the problems, he will be mentally prepared to face them and put in efforts to resolve them. An individual becomes much resilient and stronger, and he is able to successfully take on the challenges. Moreover, even if he is unsuccessful, the failure proves a blessing in disguise and bolster the mental strength, and engenders propitious results later on. For instance, Bill Gates, the successful entrepreneur and the ex-CEO of world's largest IT company, dropped out of college and faced numerous challenges and failures while developing products in the initial days, but each failure made him more determined and ultimately led to the success.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of India is taking a great initiative by educating students in the universities on the benefits of positive thinking through didactic and edifying campaigns and curriculum.
To conclude, I firmly believe that a successful person is the one who has experienced failures and overcomes the adversities without being bogged down by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07434944238 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8740507598 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3014071109 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234307974775 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914702756437 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874399581378 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129729429892 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997004024446 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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