A successful man is not the one who has ability to eliminate problems before they occur, but the one who can face the difficulties as they arise and solve them.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
It is irrefutable to say that every one gets success after a long hard work and with facing of so many difficulties. Some people think that a successful man is not the one who has ability to eliminate problems before they occur, but the one who can face the difficulties as they arise and solve them. In my views, I am agree with this statement that a successful person knows very well that how to resolve the problem and he doesn't go back to see a problem in front of him.
Firstly, success becomes a story after a hard work, a successful person has alredy faced so many difficulties. Moreover, he tries personaly to resolve the all problems so he knows practically about them. Furthermore, he has a long list of tries, so he acheives the success.
In addition, a successful person creates story and history, because they continously trying for their goal achievment and don't want to become failure, that's why, they feel relax only, when they get success.
To conclude, a successful person becomes the inspiration for others because people follow a successful person not a failure, they learn from them that how to solve the problems and get success for a special mission which they want to complete.
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| 2019-04-10 | neelu sharma | 80 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71090047393 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66068900181 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0404187835 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360161056751 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164244891116 0.0925447433944 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182283302504 0.071462118173 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216497287891 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169640396193 0.0609392437508 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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