advatange and disadvatntage of cashless banking
Nowadays many countries has discarded the usage of physical money. There are some advantages and disadvantages in using plastic cards for society.
Cashless system has had some positive effect on our life which I discuss it here. Firstly, it has rose up transaction speed in the modern life. Secondly, usually many deals have some discounts when we pay through credit cards, so they can help people financially. Lastly, you have access to your account everywhere and anytime. For example, there is no need to find a bank branch and wait for the teller to give you some cash.
On the other hand, using plastic cards has some drawbacks as well. Firstly, there are many security concerns about these cards. Because usually people use them for online shopping, easily hackers through phishing or hacking can access to private information of individual and steal their identity and their savings. Secondly, using these plastic cards can be troublesome for elder people who are not familiar with this new payment system. Finally, with lack of physical cash, you may spend more than before because of two reasons, first we cannot see the money and we are not aware of the money that we spend, and also there would be more tempting promotions.
To conclude, as it mentioned cashless system has both benefits and drawbacks together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s both benefits and drawbacks together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04977375566 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42431767499 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5268180598 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0492603271001 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192881642361 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357040855697 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418554491813 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431730229386 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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