Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
in this changing world as people and governments enter an complex situation due to the political and social events, in my perspective it's better to make distances between these crisis and our life situation inorder to prevent disturbance and protect peacefullness.in this views politics and socialogist will do this job better than us. academic situation is one of the atmosphere that is better to be isolated from external situation to get success in acceptable degree too.
first and for most, the time assighned to a class is better to expend on the school programs and material since it is fundamental for students to absorb the knowledge which is relevant to their studies and practice them to become eligible for their plans in their near future, making social or political views known to students in a classromm is defenetly a waste of time.as a matter of fact, I as a parant dislike this as I hardly efford my child's school condition.
In addition, concentrating on lessons by students needs a situation which is far away from other kinds of crisis such as social or political views that makes one to think criticaly for a long time about them that refers to human's intrinsic manner, imagine phisycs test which is associated this thinkings, this will make disorders.
the last but not the least,needless to say that political an dsocial views varies from person to person, by manifestting them in public one assimilate other's incline to say their ideas and when this wount be happen in a classroom this will contrast with democrasy in thinking and behaving and wil be just forcing ideas in others mind which is nothing but disturbing other's attitude and way of thinking and communication properly.
to put it in a nut shelves, academic situation is not a god place for a teacher to making their political an social views to the students since disadvantages of this act exceeds its advantages.
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...rdly efford my childs school condition. In addition, concentrating on lessons by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92236024845 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82138883259 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.356176754 48.9658058833 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.166666667 100.406767564 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6666666667 20.6045352989 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180277298653 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964838384378 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560112617046 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111999953054 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419941996901 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 11.7677419355 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 58.1214874552 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.