Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this could be better spent elsewhere?
Art reflects the heritage of the country also depicts the creativity of an individual.A segment of few people opines that the authority is squanderring money on the art,however this money could be better spent on other sectors of life as it has it own importance in the world.
To begin with,the arts play pivotal role as it is the collection of historical,ancient eminent parts of the decades,more than that it is a rich source of the nation history.It also attracts the tourists to visit the country and through that it generates the revenue.A prime instance,mysore and jaipur has become a vast tourist spot due to its ancient collection of sculptures,manquine's and so on through these art signatures they are fostering the taxes.Thus,the government also allocates money and guve sustenance to these art galleries.In addition they believe in exposing their nations sculptures and other relevant legacies whole over the world.
Furthermore,it plays vital role as it displays thev history of legendries and historical rivals who fought for the country's freedom for example shaheed bhagat singh,mahatma gandhi and the famous sportsmen,celebrities.in the international art gallery in london we can see the wax statues of world famous legends and popular people.
However,many people consider that this totally a wastage of money government should lay emphasis to other sectors of humanity,they believe that their are plethora of otuher issues like parks,roads,public transports and so on.Moreover,they should focus on nations poverty which is gradually crossing the alarming rate.
All in all what have been discussed above i pen down by saying that the heritage care is prominent for that government attention is inevitabe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47388059701 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49147475545 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.322443205 49.4020404114 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.4 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2084652055 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110077241372 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110035433772 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110077241372 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110035433772 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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