In many countries, women are able to join the armed forces now on the basis of men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and Air Force. Do you agree or disagree ?
There has been a growing debate that women are eligible to join the military forces. Now I am going to present my opinion by arranging statements on both sides and decide on one side that I agree with.
To commence with the opinions in favour of "agreement", most countries across the globe have female forces however they are forcibly or mandatorily conscripted. Korea, for example, it is compulsory that all Korean men are supposed to spend approximately 2 years in the military service. However, women are not even conscripted and not imposed any taxes in terms of military service. This is because that women are not that suitable for conducting dangerous operations. Furthermore, in the past, women had a role which looks after and feed casualties
Now turning our attention to the advocates called "radical people" who insist that men are only one should serve in the military service. even in 21st century, there are still many countries that face conflicts. First and foremost, it is undeniable that women are physically weaker than men and a major number of medics are women. This is does mean that women are vulnerable in comparison to men. Women are sophisticated and specialised in a certain field. One another example is that women and men, in Israel, are equally conscripted and all women are deemed to be able to carry on operations what men do. Another reason why women also should participate in the military forces is that men and women all have the same right to choose whatever it is under the constitution. Unless women are allowed, it violates the constitution.
To conclude, as far as I am concerned, women are able to carry on what men do and there are still many countries which conscript men and women equally. Even though it is still arguable that women are physically weaker than men, but there are many alternative roles for women specialised for their abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, look, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98136645963 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90346595966 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6326683459 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279674383872 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933666238138 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620447084562 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163748651091 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839089493893 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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