In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a growing demand of shopping malls instead of small shops in big cities and towns. Some people think that big shopping malls should be constructed to replace the small local shops, while others maintain that small local shops serve a peculiar purpose. This essay will discuss that why more and more large shopping malls should be constructed to replace small local town shops.
Firstly, there are myriad of arguments in favour of building big shopping malls. To begin with, a shopping mall consists of multiple stories and houses numerous shops of various brands. Moreover, a customer can save ample of time and access all shopping brands under one roof without moving from one location to another. As an example, on black friday a customer can save ample of time by easily accessing all shopping brands in a single mall. Therefore, to facilitiate customers more large shopping malls should be built instead of small distant shops.
On the other hand, scarcity of big malls and abundance of local shops would require customers to move from one place to another. This scenario might either get them struck in traffic or make them face parking issues. Hence, shopping malls not only save precious time but also provide variety of buying oppurtunities to customers under one roof.
In conclusion, building or construction of larger malls instead of small local shops would assist the citizens to access variety of brands under one roof without encountering traffic issues. However, I opine that larger malls should be built as they would serve there purpose in the best interest of local population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0936329588 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39892830042 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9202126241 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402920174656 0.242375264174 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171034124695 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105719601727 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262377545933 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126057259773 0.0609392437508 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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